一、原文:
①Some sites design their agents to tempt job hunters to return.②When CareerSite’s agent sends out messages to those who have signed up for its service,for example,it includes only three potential jobs—those it considers the best matches.③There may be more matches in the database;job hunters will have to visit the site again to find them—and they do.④“On the day after we send our messages,we see a sharp increase in our traffic,”says Seth Peets,vice president of marketing for CareerSite.
话题:线上找工作
二、步骤
1.分意群(根据标志词分意群:标点前、连词前、介词前、动词前)
2.定属性(根据意群的相对位置定属性:连接词后是“从句”)
3.调语序(根据属性调整意群的语序:定语提前或名词反复说两遍、状语提前)
4.理翻译(根据调整后的语序调整翻译:结合语境和单词感觉,调整措辞和翻译)
三、演练
1.分意群When CareerSite’s agent/sends out messages/to those/who have signed up for its service/,for example/,it includes only three potential jobs/—those/it considers/the best matches.
2.定属性:
①those+who从句;who连接的从句为定语从句/修饰前面的代词;
those(who have signed up for its service)
②when从句,主句;when从句为状语从句
(When CareerSite’s agent/sends out messages/to those/who have signed up for its service/,for example/),it includes only three potential jobs/—those/it considers/the best matches.
③those/it considers/the best matches;代词those和it同时出现,it后面还有动词consider,则从it开始是一个省略that的定语从句those(that it considers/the best matches)
3.调语序:
①that连接的从句翻译在名词之前,翻译成“...的”;
(who have signed up for its service)those翻译成“...的那些(人)”
③that连接的从句翻译在名词之前,翻译成“...的”
(that it considers/the best matches)those翻译成“...的那些(匹配职位)”
4.理翻译:
难点:match
match有“配对、匹配”的意思,这里具体指的是破折号前面“匹配的岗位”
四、理解
全句翻译:比如,当CareerSite’s agent给那些注册了它们网站服务的客户发送信息的时候,它只会发送三个潜在的岗位--那些它认为最匹配的岗位
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